VN Ren'Py Abandoned Odyssey [v0.1] [Dragoon5k]

[Jeevant]

Overview:
In Odyssey, you are an 18-year-old young man who has to fight day after day to earn a living.
Your parents died 2 years ago and you have been alone since then.
While you were working, a lawyer appears and says that he came at the behest of your unknown aunt,
and that she wants you to move in with her and her 2 daughters.
Upon learning that your parents may be alive, you decide to go live with your aunt.​

Thread Updated: 2024-07-22
Release Date: 2024-07-22
Developer: Dragoon5k

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Version: 0.1
OS: Windows
Language: English
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[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[Lerd0]

..oh nice....incest and harem...in the future....
...thx for the share...good luck to the dev....

 

[tomas024]

Thanks for your project. GOOD WORK

 

[Jafo]

This will be goooood! I am downloading this game. Good luck with developing!

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[Aerisetta]

nice hole

 

[Gumshoe08]

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Overview:
In Odyssey, you are an 18-year-old young man who has to fight day after day to earn a living.
Your parents died 2 years ago and you have been alone since then.
While you were working, a lawyer appears and says that he came at the behest of your unknown aunt,
and that she wants you to move in with her and her 2 daughters.
Upon learning that your parents may be alive, you decide to go live with your aunt.​

Thread Updated: 2024-07-22
Release Date: 2024-07-22
Developer: Dragoon5k

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Version: 0.1
OS: Windows
Language: English
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Another one with "move in with relatives who have a mom/aunt and 2 daughters" ‍♂

 

[Ali ibn Hassan]

Get to know your auntie and your cousins, bikerboy

Thnks fr shrng

 

[Wikifeet69]

The Bruce Wane - Nightmare about dead parents.

 

[Ragnar]

Chronic masturbator simulator 2024.

 

[rKnight]

Upon learning that your parents may be alive, you decide to go live with your aunt.

MC: "Auntie, I had a NIGHTMARE about my parents, they were dead,
can I sleep in your room tonight?"

THX for sharing...

 

[EvilDave86]

Be nice if pregnancy is tagged later but we shall see. Visually pleasing though so later sex scenes should be good.

 

[Cpt.SumTingWong]

Cliché

 

[SpyderArachnid]

It's about 5 minutes long if you take the time to read it. Everything is pretty blunt and straight forward, feels extremely rushed. No real emotion or build up to anything, it's just rushed at a fast pace and then over just as quick. No choices (not like there is really any to make within those 5 minutes on gameplay). Not even 100 renders. Feels more like a demo/teaser than a v0.1.

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Overall, needs some work. Especially the writing. It's just so... dead and bare bones. It's the same premise we've seen over and over, with the exception of a supernatural element added to it. Sadly, it will probably get lost in the dime a dozen games just like it already, unless it improves a lot to make it stand out amongst the tons of other games already out there with the same plot.

Either way, best of luck with this and thanks.

 

[GustavoGanz]

Let's see if the Odyssey lasts longer than 3 updates (Odysseus was on the road for 10 years) ....
The game looks pretty good. Keep it on watch/bookmark and check back after 2 or 3 updates.

 

[AlterdStates7]

But does the MC drive a motorcycle??

 

[Chimba]

While you were working, a lawyer appears and says that he came at the behest of your unknown aunt,
and that she wants you to move in with her and her 2 daughters.

EDIT: Well, I don't know whether to classify this as a demo or a game concept (5 min of reading, kinetic novel for now, te blonde's previews are from a dream), it has some details in the writing and errors (I guess it must be a translation problem since I assume this is translated from Spanish) but the story needs some more work, or at least make the conversations between the characters seem real.

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Either way this looks interesting, if the dev lurks f95 good luck.

 

[LadySpider]

It's hard to say if the game is promising, there was very little content which is to be expected in first releases. The biggest issue is how rushed things were, with no real explanation of anything going on, you only interact with a male co-worker and male lawyer so no love interest, and no choices. Due to the no choices, lack of any story telling, and no interesting characters, nothing draws in my interest. Hopefully the future releases will be improved, best of luck dev

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

New to you Overview:
In Odyssey, you are an 18-year-old young man who has to fight day after day to earn a living.
Your parents died 2 years ago, and you have been alone since then.
One day, you receive an invitation to live with an aunt you've never met and her two daughters.
Your Aunt then informs you that your parents might still be alive.
You are about to embark on a journey of discovery. Whether for better or worse, the truth must be revealed.
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The Overview was a bit dry, so I hydrated it. Use it if you like.

The game looks interesting. Thanks for the share.


Post Play: Ugg... the Engrish is heavy in this one. Proofreader needed.