Thank you, Mr. balvenie1401, for your review.SamGoodwin Some Quick feedback:
- I like the premise, the art and the phone concept, very nice.
- It lacks choices! Missing different dialogue options for the player to feel engaged, as it sits so far it could just as well been a comic. Go back and implement the ability for the player to make dialogue choices that reflect their personality otherwise it's pointless.
- You should implement the option to name the "player" asap.
If there will be choices implemented this could be quite good, if it's just planned to be a "straight up comic" it's a wash..
Best of luck.
Oh you sweet summer child. People do drugs and form gangs in prison. Guards often help prisoners get many things they "can't" have.Phone Behind Bars
Well u can't have one, so....
Hello, Mr. DGArchangel. My sources at the District Developer’s office have informed me that the Android version's development is in full swing.Make this available for android too...
Well either way I'll be following the development as it starts out, happy to join the patreon if it seems to be going in the right direction, and if not best of luck ofc.Thank you, Mr. balvenie1401, for your review.
We’ll be sure to include every bit of it in the case file and forward it to the higher-ups for careful investigation.
Best regards,
Sam Goodwin, Lawyer.
Thank you for your kind words! Be sure to check out my game - it's just the first version, but I'm confident you'll enjoy it.I love elegant women, and this wife seems to fit that vibe
I'll play it as soon as possible
Hello, Mr. redoubt27Interesting concept. The ladies are hot. But, the situation, circumstances, do not translate well at all, especially for anyone with any kind of legal or law enforcement experience...cough, cough...
Wife is already banging the ADA, probably Jesse, too, and the lawyer is in on it all. Wouldn't surprise me if he's the ADA...
The daughter is a whore.
Bella is the only one being honest right now...
Everyone else can go fuck themselves.
I'll just stay in prison. Because with the kind of "help" I'm getting now, that's where I'll end up any way...
But at least I'll no longer have to endure the lying of the whore wife...
This really needs a save function...
The story text is too slow to go back and try, test different choices, though it doesn't seem like they matter that much.
The wife seems to cheat either way...
And that's ok.
Just not the story for me.