I respect all readers preferences and ideas.
But...
I'd rather have DS leaving these ideas to other stories. TA must finish or it will turn into the most boring erotic story of all times. When we take it from the first chapter and try to follow the plot through chapter after chapter, it becomes hard to understand where the story is going to.
The number of "clues" and "tips" DS gives throughout the story leads to nowhere.
He writes entire chapters, including sex scenes that most of the time do nothing for the story but increase the "words counting number".
If we pay attention to the last eight or ten chapters of TA, without the first ten, it's really a boring story.
It takes at least three chapters to jump forward a little bit, with new possibilities. And then, more two or three chapters where nothing is confirmed.
Now Toxic Attractions is far, far away from the initial idea. It's not the same story.
DS clearly just wants to keep making money until the last dumb paying customer says "I am out".
This way of supporting authors on patreon is abusive and when we think about it, it has no sense at all.
DS had a good idea and started ok. But as the money kept flowing he obviously thought he couldn't finish TA without another one with the same commercial appeal.
None of his other stories went ahead.
After DS ends this story (if he ever does) I would like someone, or as many as you want, if not myself, to edit Toxic Attraction taking out all the bullshit DS wrote that don't add to the original plot.
I'm not saying it should be rewritten, not even compressed, but really edited to make it more enjoyable to read, without so many duplicated situations or sex scenes without any plausible reason (i.e. Jesse fucking Sarah, even Byron, Otis...).
It will be a fun exercise to see what everyone think of which scenes are unecessary.
I'm certain gonna do it for my amusement.
